This Writing Is What I Have Written In Our Writing Class

Name                      : Marya Ulfa

Student Number           : 1065057

Group                      : The 4^th Group

Subject                     : Writing 3

Topic                       : Persuasive text

Title                       : Ideal Body, Is That What You Want?

Key Sentence              : Most of artists have ideal body.

Slot of the key sentence:

Subject	Verb	Attribute	Complement
Most of the artists	have	ideal	body.

Ideal Body, Is That What You Want?

Remember the artist idol. Most of them have ideal body. They spend much money to make their performance be perfect, especially their body. When they have thin body or fat body, they go to doctor and ask the doctor how to make their body be perfect. The doctor will suggest them how the way to make their body be perfect. They will do whatever suggestion from the doctor. So, their body must be perfect.

This has gone into general society. They have imitated artist’s style, especially their ideal body. They will start making their body be perfect. Having muscular body is what men want to have because almost all of women like a man who has muscular body, and vice versa. Almost all of women want to have slim body because men like it. If they are thin, they will start making their body be perfect by going to the doctor, medicine, exercise, therapy, etc. and if they are big or fat, they will also do whatever things such as going to the doctor, following diet program, exercise, etc.

They, who are not patient, will be interested with instant program like diet program that give them bad effect. By following diet program, they will spend much money. Sometimes they will get complicated disease from diet program. They will be very thin or vice versa, they will be bigger than before. Or sometimes they will die. That will be dangerous for them.

Come out of it, it’s very dangerous for you. You should be grateful for what you have. Why do you want to change yourself, especially your body? Thanks, be grateful and take care yourself, share a smile a gesture with the others for what you have. That is positive way for getting all happiness. Don’t be impatient. Do away withal the negative alternatives.

Created By: Marya Ulfa